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  • Feb. 20th, 2008 at 11:46 PM
Bitch Goddess of Mercy- neko_youkai04
Title: The Thrill of the Fight
Fandom: Saiyuki
Pairing: Goku/Lirin
A/N: Written for wishkisses over at insane journal. I was going to wait until I had more to post, but the comm is sluggish, and this may be it.



Goku notices right away that fighting Lirin is nothing like fighting Kougaiji. She's not as strong, but she's far more unpredictable.

Goku's enjoying the fight, holding back to make it last longer. He wants to see what she'll do next.

Lirin aims a kick at his head, which he dodges with ease. She doesn't seem to care that she missed. She laughs freely, as if she's just happy just to be moving, to be fighting.

Goku's too busy watching Lirin to pay attention to the terrain, and he pays for it by slipping on a patch of loose gravel. He grabs onto the first thing he can get his hands on, which happens to be Lirin, and they both fall.

Goku lands on his back with Lirin on top of him. It would be easy for him to spring back up, but something in Lirin's eyes stops him. She grins widely and plants a firm kiss onto his lips.

Goku scrambles up and gapes at her. She just grins wider and waves at him cheerily. “I have to go now! Let's play again soon!” With that she bounds off, leaving Goku staring. At first his mind threatens to shut down under the weight of confusion and unanswered questions, but then he shakes his head. If there's one thing he's learned, it's that life is only complicated if you make it that way. She would be back eventually. They could talk then.

Goku walks back towards the others, feeling decidedly optimistic.

Comments

[info]tentationem wrote:
Feb. 21st, 2008 07:51 am (UTC)
Eee, Goku/Lirin. =) I have a soft spot for this pairing, so it's always nice to read a well-written fic for them.

Thanks for sharing. =)
[info]meicdon13 wrote:
Feb. 21st, 2008 11:09 am (UTC)
Aww, Goku x Lirin :3 It's one of my few het pairings and I love it whenever I come across fic for them. I can totally imagine seeing Lirin kissing Goku impulsively. Though I wonder what Sanzo and Kougaiji would say when they find out that their respective charges are suddenly "growing up" XD
[info]purpleicicles wrote:
Feb. 21st, 2008 09:34 pm (UTC)
Heh, I love how you write Lirin-chan - she's feisty, cheeky, and knows exactly what she wants! Excellent fic!
[info]winged_sandals wrote:
Feb. 21st, 2008 09:57 pm (UTC)
Aw, cute. I liked Lirin's impulsiveness and Goku's reaction to it.
[info]mainekosama wrote:
Feb. 22nd, 2008 06:51 am (UTC)
Awww, thay are adorable!
[info]droiche wrote:
Mar. 3rd, 2008 06:28 am (UTC)
Squeeeee! I'm fond of this little couple too. It's good to see more fans writing about them. :-D
[info]anat_astarte wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
Love it, well done! :D

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